I recently printed a few copies of a collection of The Chronicle
s (PDF ODT). As you would expect I've noticed a few errors that had I spotted them before printing I would have fixed. I did do two proofing runs which did flag up quite a few other errors which were, of course, corrected. So, I would have fixed:
- Copyright page, Fifth Paragraph
- Missing word
are
which should appear after the word interludes
in Many interludes from background...
- Major Events, Galemir 137
...begins constriction...
should read ...begins construction...
- Second paragraph following Linrodeth Sherrifs
- Add
in 148
between ...became Lady of the City
and following the invasion
.
- Linrodeth (following Midsummer 139), Last Paragraph
- The comma at the end of
It has some advantages,
should be a full stop.
- Setheran 138, Fifth paragraph
- Change spelling of
incidently
to incidentally
.
- Heliora 140, Fourth paragraph
- Add paragraph break immediately before
Cllr Perignon's problems have not ended with the...
. and another paragraph break immediately before Gax has once again...
- Arvinoth 141, Fourth Paragraph
- Change
seams
to seems
in A major dispute seams to be brewing...
- Galemir 144, First paragraph
- Missing word
of
in ...a number surprise landslides.
- Pipetal 144, Second page, Third paragraph
- Extraneous spaces inside the quoted motion text.
- Skelern 145, Second page, second paragraph
- Misplaced full stop at the end of this paragraph for British punctuation makes this hard to read
- Pipetal 145, Paragraph immediately before Late News
its
should be it's
in ...its for your own good...
- Pipetal 145, Second paragraph in Late News
- Insert a comma between
elections
and Lady
in ...just prior to the elections Lady Cox has completed by Decree...
- A Map in the Gelt Mountains (following Kryll 145)
- This image needs resharpening or something. Compare with the map of catacombs following Menderal 1421.
- Pipetal 146, Fourth Paragraph
- Add
£82
between extra
and for
the phrase ... it emerged that the extra for the docks...
.
- Jasmarill 146, Third Paragraph
- Needs a paragraph break before the sentence starting
Concerns have been raised over...
.
- Pipetal 148, First Paragraph
- Missing paragraph break immediately before the sentence that starts
Sheriff Aralan Derwent has taken...
.
- Pipetal 148, Second Paragraph
- Missing paragraph break immediately before the sentence that starts
Lady Beatrice Perignon is delighted...
. Note that with these two extra paragraph breaks I would have been forced into a light eidt to avoid a couple of orphan lines.
- Jasmarill 148, Last Paragraph
- Space after the opening quotation mark for Randy Parkinson's quote should instead be immediately before the quotation mark.
- Menderal 148
- The text of this Chronicle is a repeat of that for Menderal 149. A correct version of the contents can be found at on this website at Setheran 148.
- Jasmarill 150, Second Paragraph
- Remove the
s
from the word votes
in ...and declared his intention to votes against the motion.
- A Map of Oldgate Ward
- This map was based on Aldgate Ward in London. As such it needs reflecting horizontally across the middle of the map2. Compare with the map of Linrodeth as whole.
- Menderal 151, Title line
The Chronicle
is missing its leading T
.- Menderal 151, First Paragraph
of
should be on
in ...its advance of Linrodeth...
.- Ternost 151, First Paragraph
- Change
off
to of
in ... and killed by a group off masked assailants.
.
- Ternost 151, Fifth Paragraph
- Change
trail
to trial
in ... turn attention away from his trail...
.
- Ternost 154, Second Paragraph
- Missing full stop after the quotation mark that immediately follows
...scared to enter
.
- Skelern 155, First Paragraph
- Missing paragraph break between
difficult.
and This
in ...making patrolling difficult. This month's committee...
.
- Ternost 155, Last Paragraph
an
should be and
in ...wagons were overturned an abandoned on the...
.- Midwinter 156, Last Paragraph
- Space missing before
133
in ... by 143 votes to133.
.
- Galemir 156, First Paragraph
loose
should be lose
in ...see the Agency loose its ability...
.
- Galemir 156, Committee and Envoy Results
- Missing a colon and a space between the post and its winner.
- Arvinoth 156, Second Paragraph
- Missing full stop between
Gavelkinden
and This
in ...in the Gavelkinden This move which...
.
- Caralingas Lineage
- Birth year of
131
for Eleanor is wrong (since that would make her only 10 when Alexis was born). 121
is the correct year.
- Skelern 158, Fourth Paragraph
- The following should be inside quotation marks:
We now wait to see which of our Aldermen will vote for the right people and which will follow orders and vote for the grubby deal we were first presented with
. At the end of this quotation should be a sentence break. Also a missing comma before the very last word are:
.
Let me know if you find more!
Last updated: December 29, 2017 at 15:47 pm
Footnotes
- Not sure what happened here - this looked fine in the proof print ↩
- Sigh, had I spotted when I first created the map it would have been relatively easy to do by just reversing the greaseproof paper I used to copy the road layout - and then scribe in the road names and annotations. To fix it now will require some significant work in an image manipulation program! ↩
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still not enough!). Here's I'm going to attempt to record at still some of the most recent ones I've read and perhaps
manage a few words. The most recently read will be at the top of the list.
A note on the rating scheme - I've deliberately widened my original scheme, so you note that a 'D' rating does not
indicate that the book is rubbish (I'll save the 'F' for that), just I don't rate it as highly as others on the list (you could treat as
3 of 5 stars on some other schemes)
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- 2312 (Hard Science Fiction by Kim Stanley Robinson)
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Mercury in the same again.
Overall Rating: A
- The Great Railway Conspiracy (Non-fiction by David Henshaw)
- A strongly pro-rail history of the railways focusing on the beeching era (but not ignoring either before or after that date). Definitely
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Overall Rating: C
- The next 100 years (Non-fiction by George Friedman)
-
Billed as a reasonable guess of world politics for the next 100 years (written in 2008), this is an interesting read. George manages to
do a well reasoned prediction. I do buy into some of what he says, though I do feel he's too quick to dismiss both China and the European Union
(he does explain his reasoning though). As usual with these kind of books, the more fun comes in several years time when you can compare what
actually happened with the guess.
Overall Rating: C
- The Colossal Book of Mathematics (Non-fiction by Martin Gardner - reread)
-
Hmm, a lot of mathematics recently. This is one of Martin's last books. It reprints the greatest chapters from
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post-date that earlier book.
Overall Rating: B
- The Great Mathematical Problems (Non-fiction by Ian Stewart)
-
A description of the big questions in Mathematics - whether still open or now closed. So it includes a chapter
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were created) from trying to solve the problem.
Overall Rating: B
- On the road bike (Non-fiction by Ned Boulting)
-
Ned is a TV journalist covering road bicycle races (Apparently he also commentates on football, but that not my thing). This book
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Overall Rating: B
- Metamaths (Non-fiction by Gregory Chaitin)
-
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- transcendental
- uncomputable
- unnameable (since the names of numbers make up merely a countable set)
Overall rating: B
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-
Read after I followed a link on tvtropes (Summon Bigger Fish)
Not quite as good as I anticipated, as its resolution left plenty unexplained. Still I only expected a light read and got that
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- The Better Angels of Our Nature (non-fiction by Steven Pinker)
-
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Overall Rating: A
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-
Nassim tries to show that there are things that not only not fragile, but actually gain from shocks.
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Overall Rating: A
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