Errata for 21 Years of The Chronicle

I recently printed a few copies of a collection of The Chronicles (PDF ODT). As you would expect I've noticed a few errors that had I spotted them before printing I would have fixed. I did do two proofing runs which did flag up quite a few other errors which were, of course, corrected. So, I would have fixed:

Copyright page, Fifth Paragraph

Missing word are which should appear after the word interludes in Many interludes from background...

Major Events, Galemir 137

...begins constriction... should read ...begins construction...

Second paragraph following Linrodeth Sherrifs

Add in 148 between ...became Lady of the City and following the invasion.

Linrodeth (following Midsummer 139), Last Paragraph

The comma at the end of It has some advantages, should be a full stop.

Setheran 138, Fifth paragraph

Change spelling of incidently to incidentally.

Heliora 140, Fourth paragraph

Add paragraph break immediately before Cllr Perignon's problems have not ended with the.... and another paragraph break immediately before Gax has once again...

Arvinoth 141, Fourth Paragraph

Change seams to seems in A major dispute seams to be brewing...

Galemir 144, First paragraph

Missing word of in ...a number surprise landslides.

Pipetal 144, Second page, Third paragraph

Extraneous spaces inside the quoted motion text.

Skelern 145, Second page, second paragraph

Misplaced full stop at the end of this paragraph for British punctuation makes this hard to read

Pipetal 145, Paragraph immediately before Late News

its should be it's in ...its for your own good...

Pipetal 145, Second paragraph in Late News

Insert a comma between elections and Lady in ...just prior to the elections Lady Cox has completed by Decree...

A Map in the Gelt Mountains (following Kryll 145)

This image needs resharpening or something. Compare with the map of catacombs following Menderal 142¹.

Pipetal 146, Fourth Paragraph

Add £82 between extra and for the phrase ... it emerged that the extra for the docks....

Jasmarill 146, Third Paragraph

Needs a paragraph break before the sentence starting Concerns have been raised over....

Pipetal 148, First Paragraph

Missing paragraph break immediately before the sentence that starts Sheriff Aralan Derwent has taken....

Pipetal 148, Second Paragraph

Missing paragraph break immediately before the sentence that starts Lady Beatrice Perignon is delighted.... Note that with these two extra paragraph breaks I would have been forced into a light edit to avoid a couple of orphan lines.

Jasmarill 148, Last Paragraph

Space after the opening quotation mark for Randy Parkinson's quote should instead be immediately before the quotation mark.

Menderal 148

The text of this Chronicle is a repeat of that for Menderal 149. A correct version of the contents can be found at on this website at Menderal 148.

Jasmarill 150, Second Paragraph

Remove the s from the word votes in ...and declared his intention to votes against the motion.

A Map of Oldgate Ward

This map was based on Aldgate Ward in London. As such it needs reflecting horizontally across the middle of the map². Compare with the map of Linrodeth as whole.

Menderal 151, Title line

The Chronicle is missing its leading T.

Menderal 151, First Paragraph

of should be on in ...its advance of Linrodeth....

Ternost 151, First Paragraph

Change off to of in ... and killed by a group off masked assailants..

Ternost 151, Fifth Paragraph

Change trail to trial in ... turn attention away from his trail....

Ternost 154, Second Paragraph

Missing full stop after the quotation mark that immediately follows ...scared to enter.

Skelern 155, First Paragraph

Missing paragraph break between difficult. and This in ...making patrolling difficult. This month's committee....

Ternost 155, Last Paragraph

an should be and in ...wagons were overturned an abandoned on the....

Midwinter 156, Last Paragraph

Space missing before 133 in ... by 143 votes to133..

Galemir 156, First Paragraph

loose should be lose in ...see the Agency loose its ability....

Galemir 156, Committee and Envoy Results

Missing a colon and a space between the post and its winner.

Arvinoth 156, Second Paragraph

Missing full stop between Gavelkinden and This in ...in the Gavelkinden This move which....

Caralingas Lineage

Birth year of 131 for Eleanor is wrong (since that would make her only 10 when Alexis was born). 121 is the correct year.

Skelern 158, Fourth Paragraph

The following should be inside quotation marks: We now wait to see which of our Aldermen will vote for the right people and which will follow orders and vote for the grubby deal we were first presented with. At the end of this quotation should be a sentence break. Also a missing comma before the very last word are:.

Let me know if you find more!